HI SORRY weekdays are hard for me sometimes my bad
I think that all looks pretty okay? It does make JC look kind of incompetent, the fact that this rogue vamp was under his nose, but then again that was the point of the plot itself so that's not your fault haha. He would want this problem taken care of as soon as possible, though he would appreciate her turning them over to the Nest for punishment yes. Especially so that he can make an example of them himself. He doesn't need to look incompetent and then have the fae doing his work for him in the end, you know? He'll be happy to bargain with her, but he's pretty smart. He won't give up too much.
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I think that all looks pretty okay? It does make JC look kind of incompetent, the fact that this rogue vamp was under his nose, but then again that was the point of the plot itself so that's not your fault haha. He would want this problem taken care of as soon as possible, though he would appreciate her turning them over to the Nest for punishment yes. Especially so that he can make an example of them himself. He doesn't need to look incompetent and then have the fae doing his work for him in the end, you know? He'll be happy to bargain with her, but he's pretty smart. He won't give up too much.
Does that work for you? :'Da